Schools Rubbish Pollution

I am learning to write to persuade others:

Firstly,the rubbish at our School will be an  attraction to rats and mice

which means diseases will spread around our school.This  will affect  us and  also the community around  our school which will also mean  that parents won’t get to work  to make money  to support  their families because people will end up staying home sick.

Secondly,if the wind blows the rubbish into the drains.This will mean the drains will get blocked and we will have to get our school to pay a huge  amount of  money to unblock  the drains. The school could actually use

that money to buy teaching  resources and P E equipment.

Thirdly,our main reason is make our school surroundings  

clean  so that we will stay healthy and happy.When  we are

healthy and happy we can concentrate more and focused

more in our studies in order for us  to become good and brainy people and students.